Day 7 of The Concord Initiative storytime!

There was a serious clutter problem on the latter two pages. I learned what is probably one of the cardinal lessons of writing--9 times out of 10, say less. Words are precious. Choose them wisely.

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(6) Korda Six would be the final battle for Jaster Mereel, some six years after the events on Concord Dawn (52 BBY). The incursion on Korda Six proved to be a disaster, with several True Mandalorian troop carriers crash landing from planetary ion-canon blasts. Continued 👇🏻

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(5) Jaster’s fight against the Death Watch would take him back to Concord Dawn in 58 BBY, where he would adopt a young orphan of the war named Jango Fett. The True Mandalorians would find victory against Death Watch on Concord Dawn thanks to Jaster’s tactical leadership. 👇🏻

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ALL ABOUT JASTER MEREEL: Jaster Mereel was a human male from Concord Dawn, an agricultural world in the Mandalore sector. He served as a Journeyman Protector, the lawkeepers of Concord Dawn, until his high sense of morals led him to kill a corrupt superior. Continued 👇🏻

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here ya go! this is my character concorde the hedgie :D

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Today,
I wanna do fusion colour with my OC, Concorde!

If you have a Sonic OC, feel free to send it over! I open this to everyone, new followers are welcome!

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Day 5 of The Concord Initiative storytime!

Like many characters in this comic, Astreides's nose seems to grow and shrink at will. I realized around this point that I had a Pinocchio problem--every character's nose was long and pointed. We fixed that... mostly.

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Day 4 of Concord Initiative Storytime!

Quite a few rough faces here, but the biggest regret is making such a great potential panel in the 4th page here so small--the raining scene could have been tremendous.

It's also amazing just how much dialogue you can cut.

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おめでたいローマコイン
誕生記念貨と結婚記念貨
Congratulations
CONCORDIAE AETERNAE(永遠の融和)

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Gostei de fazer meus nenens no marcador de paginassss 💚 concordo que estamos precisando de mais amorrrrr

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Day 3 of the Concord Initiative story time.

I learned a tremendous amount from rewriting these particular four pages over half a dozen times. The crowding of the speech bubbles, the importance of layer control... remembering to save the photoshop file, not just the png...

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Day 2 of the Concord Initiative story time. Four pages a day, every day, for the next 24 days.

That damn flag needs to be updated. Hell, most of the art should be, too, but to spend time redoing 100 pages is folly. It'll do the job, for now.

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100 pages of The Concord Initiative, a story about the brutal reality of mortality and pain, the blood soaked dark side of revolutions, and priceless power of stories and faith.

Production started a year ago, so the initial quality is not reflective of my current abilities!

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Hopefully Concorde doesn't have too much colors

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Breaking news: New Researcher Development Concordat launched by Chair of Concordat Strategy Group, Prof Julia Buckingham - a milestone in history of career development for researchers https://t.co/wuWIXhExL1

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