Idk if anyone caught on, but Madeleine, Graham, and Lucy all wanted to watch the same tofu documentary lol

I love tofu, I’d love to write a story about a tofu maker... or is that too in my wheelhouse now, after GH....

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I wish I’d spent more time on Yuzu and Anise’s friendship (/romance?)

It’s mostly established through little things like how they were already friends in culinary school before they were hired with Meyer at Cosmos

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Not a lot happens in the Ube Halaya ep, I wanted to try an episode that was mostly a dialogue-free cooking sequence

Graham re-associating cooking with Lucy enjoying his food rather than the fallout at Dimanche is nice, though!

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I think a lot about how this is Madeleine and Lucy’s second and last interaction with each other

People remark on how Lucy helped all the Dimanche chefs she met, but I made the decision that there had to be at least one she didn’t!

For Madeleine, Graham helps her

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Obviously that doesn’t excuse her behavior, but I hoped that readers could somewhat relate to how the absence of external support and constantly having people assume the worst in you hurts

Like yeah, she’s still at fault, but you understand

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Heath trying really hard to rebuild his relationship with Brie and Madeleine constantly getting in the way was my favorite bit in this arc

Someone please help Heath make friends

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Looking at his ex-girlfriend and current one—Graham has A Type™️

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Having characters together because they choose to, and not because the plot demands it isn’t always the most sound writing choice—but for the message of this story, I think Graham simply affirming that change won’t ruin Lucy’s life is important

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It’s finally time for Lucy to articulate her character conflict!!

Lucy leaving Gourmet Hound worried me a lot bc I’d have to figure out how maneuver the plot so they’d stay in contact—but it was important to Lucy’s character that she leave

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I’m not sure if ppl picked it up, but a lot of the time Graham expresses his care as “I want her life to be easier”

I’m not sure why I stuck with that phrase for him, but it feels right!

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Also it’s wild to me that people thought Graham would punch Jacobi when this is a canonical Graham story, he’s SOFT

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I also wanted to distance the story from the message “Bad things happen so we can learn from it”—sometimes bad things happen and it just sucks!!

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A lot of this arc is to complicate what happened at Dimanche—of course Graham was a victim, but Graham himself does not hold Madeleine solely accountable

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I wanted to give Yuzu at least one moment of insight and dignity—I try to do that for most of my comic relief characters (even Quincy got one)!

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Also I was reminded that I drew this in August 2018, which was riiight at the start of Bon Appetit breaking big

So I thought I was being subtle, but NOW IT’S VERY OBVIOUS

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Sherry is the most perceptive character, and has the distance to foresee the breakdown Lucy will have in the Bartlett arc

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The point of the episode is that we finally get an outsider’s view of Lucy—and Sherry immediately senses Lucy’s desperation, and how Lucy’s search isn’t just a foodie’s quirky quest

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I saw people in the comments trying to decipher if “Detective Mystic” was foreshadowing

Unfortunately no, they’re just Joanna and Walt’s ships for a fictional TV show lmao

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Also, the pants that Madeleine is wearing in this scene is part of a set with the jacket Sherry is wearing when she first shows up!

Sherry stole the jacket before leaving lmao

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