# lumbergallery wip excalibur afteryearsvn frankherbert novel scifibook duneart fanart scifiart dune

the spacing on this doodoo page is fucking annoying but my head hurts and im going to sleep

6 19
2022-01-15

WELL...

Not sure what to make of that... Genuinely... Not a patch on the original either way.

The pacing was awful and definitely dragged, and there was so much unnecessary stuff in here but visually it was great, the effects were insane and the music is pretty cool too

0 11
2022-01-15

Return of the Queen’s fangs!
(Hmm if feels like I miscounted teeth spacing… 🤔)

Crumbs it’s been that long since I gave Entrapta fangs? https://t.co/B3KP0d9m1K

1 12
2022-01-13

Her hobby is laundry?? Ershin’s is spacing out and that’s very relatable

1 6
2022-01-13

Aron also manages pacing with detail, to keep us lingering on quiet scenes or flying along with action (note: action scenes have multiple panels and light detail, quiet scenes have spotted blacks more info) he controls viewer throughout the book. amazing 3/3

3 38
2022-01-13

This book is a masterclass on storytelling, action and pacing. Fight scenes and car (fight/chase) scenes are so beautifully designed/choreographed 2/3

4 45
2022-01-13

Latest on talks pacing: “The use of space & silence is really important. Drawing out the moment and adding the crashing ocean, so that visually, the situation almost overwhelms the characters—it’s pretty masterful use of timing.” - https://t.co/iTmJtfQyuZ

2 24
2022-01-13

Kegar's dad, Victor, works as a baker. Originally, he was supposed to show up in Kegar's backstory on Day2, but in the end I decided to trim this part of the story for better pacing. Perhaps we'll see him in the Epilogue?
🦁🥐

16 88
2022-01-12

Shada - 8/10

A really good adaptation of the lost TV story. It translates to audio so much better, the pacing is excellent. Paul McGann's performance reminds me why Eight is my favourite doctor. I'm so happy to be listening to the McGann audios again.

0 1
2022-01-11

When i think about "dynamic layouts" combined with great storytelling I am usually thinking about X-factor run. Exciting action and wonderful acting and pacing....
i owned that Havok page but a student stole it from my classroom :(

0 3
2022-01-11

I'm legit sad by the breakneck pacing & direction of Rose King,which is one of those manga I have been yearning to see in anime medium.
Outside of Mitsuki Saiga's Richie,whose voice completes him in my head and Kentarou Izumi's(Art Dir.) excellent picturesque paintings.. https://t.co/bidHIWmgAa

1 5
2022-01-10

An unhealthy amount of experimenting later with timing/framerate, I think I'm finally happy with the overall pacing for everything!

Also, hands continue to be my weakest area... pixel art or otherwise.

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2022-01-10

ENNEAD season 2 spoilers//

This chapter was really heartbreaking but at the very least, I'm glad Seth is learning true remorse for what he's done. The pacing of his character development is just incredible aaaa...it suits his established character so well!八(＾□＾*)

31 224
2022-01-10

I think I am beginning to understand why Mission Hill got cancelled after 1 season.

Its the pacing. The pacing in the show resembles something out of a Netflix owned property. It also believe it or not has continuity in between episodes which is a huge no no for an AS show.

0 6
2022-01-07

Ed Gein: Demon Hunter was a gruesomely well-rounded intro into the story. Great art, pacing, and setup.

Admittedly, it could have teased more action with a flash forward or flash back but I really love its structure and art!

2 10
2022-01-06

Youmu because I kept seeing an icon and I guess subconsciously inspired by Pe_lo's Patch_ouli (spacing as I don't want the search to be boggled)

45 291
2022-01-06

On my commute and finished reading ' Love Condemns Her. Each page is a masterclass in flow and pacing with layouts that makes you want to just take your time going through the story. It also has the story in Japanese which I really appreciated.

10 54
2022-01-04

I finished DIE yesterday, I think it has some pacing issues in the second half, and some bits I think aren't handled great
Issue 19 is amazing, issue 20 is fine
I think your milage may vary, but it's worth a read if you like thinking about ttrpgs and why we play
Anyways, gender

1 1
2022-01-04

Super Dimensional Century Orguss / 1983

It ain't Macross, but that's OK. Goofy, sweet and sometimes kinda cool. Nice art, slow and comfy pacing. Dumbass MC, big daft supporting cast. Feels like Gundam 79's earth arc, but as an entire show. Extremely vague finale.

Good stuff.

0 6
2022-01-03