I did this back in march but I feel obligated to do it again cause last time I didn’t get much actual criticism.

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Time for a little criticism.
Let's continue with constructive criticism to where I draw something that I don't like about the franchise, and explain why I don't like it and what I would do to fix it.
Perhaps the most controversial so far... Doppel Arle.

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フラッシュさんのトレーナーさん、イケメンすぎませんか?恋愛強者のフラッシュさんが落ちるのも納得ですね!

ENTL:

Though Uma Musume are superior to humans

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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ENTL:

Tarumae-chan before a race

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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汝、ルナちゃんの独占欲を見よ!遅くなって申し訳ございません、こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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ENTL:

Fine Motion caring for her Trainer's health

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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ENTL:

Flash-san and her famous quote

(Note: The first bubble is a direct quote from Eishin Flash in the game, it was said when her Trainer proposed a race between them.
This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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ENTL:

Goofing around

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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this man was born by me listening to "I am all of me" by Crush40 on repeat for two days no I will not take any criticism.

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翻訳の許可本当にありがとうございます!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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Listen Fuck Nuts, I was hating on Disney before I was ever online. I can easily do both and still like Tigger because I understand nuance and I understand criticism.

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かっこかわいいチケゾー、最強では?遅くなって申し訳ございません、こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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翻訳の許可本当にありがとうございます!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

Furious Tarumae

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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翻訳の許可本当にありがとうございます!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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翻訳の許可本当にありがとうございます!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

Hayakawa Tazuna, who inherited Dio's factors

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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リッキー大先生かわいい...結婚しよ!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

Copano Rickey really wants to go out together

(Note: The fortune slip promises great fortune for both love and marriage.
This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

2 13

翻訳の許可本当にありがとうございます!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

※Minor spoiler for Sumeru's Archon Quest

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

2 18

Me and are passionate
Overlord X Kazuma shippers.

We do not take criticism.

(in the last picture he's protecting his boyfriend.)

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翻訳の許可本当に感謝していまする!こちらは英語の翻訳です。

ENTL:

(Note: This is just an amateur attempt, please feel free to offer corrections and criticism.)

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