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@PelleCreepy @NinjainkArt So it seems Siggy is in even more trouble now, and may end up getting burned after playing with fire.
@Angry_Crow24 Finally, I wanted to close by pulling up two panels I liked in particular - good presentation in these.
@Angry_Crow24 A few parts were very wordy, like the one in the picture. See what you can do to cut words.
Also, I didn't understand why the female android wants so many milkshakes. Mentioning multiple times = it must be important?
@MiguelPizzuto86 Once you take away "just punch the bad guy in the face," it gets really fun thinking of different solutions. Its also why I gave the MC a squirt gun.
Got some time to get coloring again! Here's a process image where I took a piece posted by @JP7art and test-flatted the lineart. I'm going to work on those background lights & table edging, but I think this color scheme works and will finish flats and try shading.
@squidmamaart @A_lost_clone @RobKuro85 @roikfbuwgc254 @PelleCreepy @NinjainkArt Now on that scene specifically, it seemed Siggy was making a move and got cut off by Lansky's car breaking down.
I'm thinking the end of the first arc sets us up for some more drama, and hopefully resolution, in the next.
@MeabotVT And here's a fun alt version - can you spot the differences?
Thanks @MeabotVT for this artwork of Petro doing an experiment! I wonder what he ate to produce that substance?
@PelleCreepy @James02894992 @POTUSThump But there are multiple examples of good artistic representation in Stars&Strife that both readers and creators must not miss. It helps the reader understand what's really going on. One other I liked was Vicki presented as something akin to the rabid Old Yeller in these panels.