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Page 7 was one of my favorites from early on and I felt like it aged well, so most of the edits were just refining there. Page 8 got reformatted a bit in order to help the page flow a little better. I’m pretty happy with the final versions of these two pages in particular!
Side-by-side comparisons!
Pages 5 and 6 experienced the bulk of the change. Additions were made in page 5 to make the interaction between Romy and Dallas feel less “empty”, and page 6’s formatting was changed around quite a bit in order to make better use of space.
Another batch of revisions complete! Pages 5-8, to be precise.
Lots of format related changes in this group, since... early as they were, they were pretty experimental and ambitious - and there were some glaring things I definitely wanted to change.
Local Dog is Bullied by Furniture... more news at 8! Followed by Friends.
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Interrogated... for being too cute (if only).
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#slumberqa
@Imagining_Ink: Boone, my man, my pal, my bro, how often do you headbutt things you really shouldn't headbutt?
Welcome to SlumberTown, the horrible horrible nightmare land where furniture harasses you.
Sliding into a big climatic scene here that I’ve been quite looking forward to! Romy’s insecurities getting dragged to the forefront... looks like she can’t ignore them anymore.
O-oh dear... not BLUSHING! Anything but THAT!
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According to the newest SlumberTown update: Romy’s posture... SOCKS.
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