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First of these changes in a while that is an actual rewrite, rather than just a thesaurus trip. Still carries that air about it though, "fancying" up the simple english of before.

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Seriously, there's gotta be some kinda edit quota they have to hit for a new edition.

"Ngh" doesn't quite cut it, "Deah" is where it's at. Now we're cooking.

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Another minor, inoffensive, but utterly unnecessary change.

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Minor change. Guy sounding more like a Speedwagon-esque commentator in the new version.

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More transparent shirt can be seen on my other account

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Kind of another case like the Floki remuneration change where they pulled out the thesaurus. Not as weird a word, of course, but my point stands. A more complex word for no real benefit. Is there some rule where a new edition needs to have a certain percent of the words changed?

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Another super minor change. Really don't understand the reason behind some of these.

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Two more that are minor but just don't sound as good in the new version.

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Another that just changes one word, but this one is a definite downgrade. Like, clearly talking about things as a rite of passage sort of thing, you know, "becoming a man", not just being one.

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Picking back up, another extremely minor, one word change as well as one that is small but I do think is a downgrade. "Are we even moving" is much clearer than "Are we going".

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