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The tension with the Truckers and Eirene's fall from grace is great, but this event is every bit as bloated as [IL SIRACUSANO]. Giving smaller characters (Ingrid, Crown, Lapp, Beast Lords) the same airtime with the stars (Eirene, Penance, Mafia,) is unfocused writing.
12/14

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The "lesson" continues when Penance lets Ingrid go despite plans of setting a warrant against her. And this is the same Penance who refused the emergency powers of the law to bring down the mafia.
Ingrid is free, while Lappland gets the power of 4 Beast Lords as reward.
11/14

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Compared to [LONE TRAIL], the story jumps to several character storylines, but they always point back to Kristen and the consequences of her actions. This creates a sensation of urgency that slowly builds up until we finally meet her in the end.
5/14

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You'd think the car crash is a mystery, but the explanation is so simple that they had to add Ingrid and Crownslayer's stories to bloat the story and delay the climax with B and C plots.
3/14

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Nuovo Volsinii is a new city that hopes to change the direction of Siracusa's culture. The city has hit a roadbump with Vigil getting into an accident and Penance going detective to try to uncover the mystery, all the while the mafia hopes to embed themselves into the city. 2/14

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If you want a better story of an operator returning home to their duties, read [Near Light].
Or about a reluctant operator but with less moping, read [Gavial, the Great Chief Returns].
Or about the everymen behind great men, go read [Come Catastrophes Or Wake of Cultures]
8/9

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It's about post-war stories, but also about Vina moping about with Doc, the gang, Gawain, Diane and with her father.
There were bits with Millscar, Diane, Shearer/ Dephine but they were overshadowed by Vina being a sad sack.
2/9

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Kal'tsit has fallen.

Billions must pull.

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