Exalted Speedさんのイラストまとめ

Naomi does everything except find a good angle on things, it tries everything. But the biggest sin of Naomi as a heroine is not obvious. You might not been ever thinking about it now, hell I haven't even mentioned it. But here's the truth....

and here is the shocking twist of this thread....Naomi was done better before. In fact there was another series before this one that did most of it's ideas better. Meet Chase, aka the better comic you don't know about.

That's kind of the big problem Naomi knows it's going to get ONE GN at least, so it's not worried too much about the issues, or to get the reader hooked at one. Issues one is the first chance at BUZZ, it might not be your biggest seller....but you should put your best forward.

These are the last pages of Ms. Marvel number 1 from 2014. Now I'm going to get some hit for bringing her up look at this, you have a young girl turning into the sexy version of Carol and being awkward, in a bad situation...that's how you kind of grab people, you bring DANGER

Now Naomi has a very easy to sum up plot, the six issues are Naomi finds out that the small town she lives in is more weird then she thought and she discovers she has superpowers because she's from another universe. There that is six issues.

If your expecting a total EVISCERATION of the character, this is not the thread. This is to talk about learning from mistakes. Because sometimes mistakes are not obvious as some people will make them. Sometimes they are more in the details.

I mean seriously.

@GundamLet Oh same.

*Okay let's see what run this is.
*Issue 37
You know I'm impressed a Captain Marvel run has managed to go 37 issues without causing a shitstorm on twitter.

Mj story would be she needed time away from Peter after the kid napping and she was in LA and this brings us to the reason in the modern day people like MJ the JMS run. Well get to one more day.....but for now...let's see what it was like before.